Example 1:
Research Question: Why does it take so long for Odysseus to return home?
Thesis: In Homer's The Odyssey, it takes Odysseus ten years to return home after the war because he disrespects the gods.
Keywords: Odysseus, return home, long time, delay, nostos, journey, disobedience OR disobey
Evidence:
- Odysseus disrespects Poseidon by stealing his son Polyphemus' food, blinding him, and then boasting about it (book 9). Poseidon responds by creating numerous delays for Odysseys.
- Odysseus' men, whom he is responsible for, open the bag of winds from Aeolus, which would have sped up their journey, and eat the cattle of Helios, who then convinces Zeus to sink Odysseus' ship for this act.
- "Zeus...in Reinhardt's view is angry because the hero has arrogated to himself a divine mandate never given him: the god turns away from Odysseus' sacrifice because he does not approve of the execution of a sentence made falsely in his name" (Friedrich).
Works Cited
Homer. The Odyssey. Translated by Robert Fagles, Viking, 1996.
Friedrich, Rainer. “The Hybris of Odysseus.” The Journal of Hellenic Studies, vol. 111, 1991, pp. 16–28.